Two sides of one coin again, what I have so far Options

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Chapter one: Friends or foes?

All is quiet in a desert area; the only sound heard was the sounds made from a robot piloted by a young woman with blue hair and hazel eyes.

“Data collecting complete.” the young woman said.

“Hey Noal have you got any readings?” the woman asked her partner that had blonde hair and green eyes who was monitoring from another area.

“Nothing yet, Aki,” Noal replied as a crashing sound was hear followed by an explosion which knocked the machine Aki was piloting off her feet.

“Aki are you okay?”

“I’m fine, what was that?”Aki asked as she got the machine back onto its feet.

“I don’t know maybe it was some kind of meteor attack, let’s check it out.” Noal suggested

“Right.”

A few minutes later Noal and Aki arrived at the source of the crash.

“Do you think anything survived?”Aki asked as Noal shined a flashlight in the area the smoke was pouring out of.

Suddenly what looked like two humanoid figures came walking out of the smoke and promptly passed out.

“Come on.”Aki said as she jumped down into the crater with Noal following behind her.

A few minutes later they found the two people still lying in the crater, it appeared to be a young man and a young woman a few years apart in age. From appearances the male had short, dark hair and was well built, while the girl was taller, had long hair and slighter build, but still with some defined muscle.

“Are they human?” Aki asked wondering how two people could have survived an explosion like that.

Sometime later Aki and Noal had taken the two strangers with them back to their headquarters.

“So this is one of the two people you pulled from the crater?” asked an older man that had white hair and red eyes.

“This is one of them,” Aki said “I just can’t believe somehow they lived through that explosion.”

“The girl is in the other medical room.” Noal reported entering the conversation.

“Any idea who they are?” the older man asked

“No chief whoever they are, only they can tell us who and what they are.”

“Milly why don’t you go check on our other guest.” The chief said to the space knight’s communications officer who was in the medical room the strange young man was in.

“Yes sir.”Milly said as she went into the other medical room where the mysterious girl was resting after being brought in.

“How bad are her injuries doctor?” Milly asked

“They aren’t life threatening if that’s what you mean,” the doctor replied “though the injuries are a little bad, most of it is superficial but according to the x-ray her arm is broken in at least three places.”

Suddenly there was a loud wail as the alarm suddenly started going off.

“Intruder, Alert!” A voice said over the intercom “The intruder is heading towards #3 hanger!”

“Is that the other patient that was brought in from the crater?” the Doctor wondered.

“I’ll have to ask the commander.”Milly replied as the sound of groaning was heard stopping her in her tracks, when she turned around both her and the doctor noticed the figure on the bed was starting to wake up.

“Where am I?” the girl asked as she opened her eyes which were an interesting shade of purple “Miyuki is that you I had the weirdest dream?”

“I’m sorry but I think you have me mistaken for someone else.” Milly said as the girl sat up in fright after hearing that.

“Who are you?” the girl demanded “Are you with the Radam or are you with the humans?!”

“I don’t even know what the Radam are!”

“The aliens!”

“Oh so that’s what they are called.”

“Can you at least tell me where I am?”

“You are in the headquarters of the outer space development agency on earth; we found you and another guy unconscious from blood loss among other things.” The doctor reported as Milly slipped out the door and went back to the other medical room.

A few minutes later Milly came back in followed by the chief.

“Are you the leader of this group?” the strange lady asked

“Yes I am the leader of the outer space development agency, what is your name?”

“I usually just answer to the name Sword.”

“That’s an unusual name.”

“I got it an unusual way.”

“Anyway, maybe you can offer some information on these aliens, your friend ran off before we could ask him anything.”

“My friend?”

“The young man that was brought in with you.”

“Oh Blade, is he okay?”

“He seems to be fine he woke up and than broke into one of our hangers and stole one of our ships.”

“Why am I not surprised he always was a bit headstrong.”